Blog Post #4 on plans for revision, etc. and Peer Response
In my outline, I carefully made a plan of what I could do if I were to perform this research. I think that my ideas for how I would perform the research are pretty solid and I do not plan on changing that. Jay was my peer reviewer on my outline. He commented that he would reccomend I specify that each sample group in my research would have a 30 + size. This advice was very helpful and I plan to be more specific with that in my final report. He also added that too small a sample size would make it easy to link demographic to the results of my research. This could setback my research because it could potentially invalidate it. I definitely agree with this and I plan on making these revisions to my final draft.